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The Queen's Mosquitoes

QM Part 1

PART I — BUGGED

 

Many long years far in the past 

And a thousand miles to the west

A Queen inside her castle 

Was bothered by a pesky, little pest

 

Each night when she would get in bed 

And blow the candles out

She'd start to hear a tiny mosquito 

Buzzing all about

 

It would buzz around her head 

And buzz inside her ear

Until she'd light a candle 

Then the bug would disappear

 

But breezes gusted through the room

Blowing out the candle’s flame

So the mosquito went right back to 

Its buzz-and-biting game

 

The Queen spent hours in sleepless ire 

Swatting the nighttime air

Until at last she'd had enough 

And called her staff in despair

 

"It's been at least a week," she cried 

"Since I've had a good night's rest

Something must be done tonight 

To get rid of that pest!"

 

Her top advisors came together 

And met for hours on end

But every plan they came up with 

They could not recommend

 

They wanted to seal the windows shut 

But the weather was too hot

They thought about burning candles all night

But the night breeze meant they could not

 

At last the Maid, who was listening in 

Told them with a shrug

"All you have to do, my friends 

"Is be smarter than the bug"

 

"If you're so smart," the advisors said 

"Come up with a plan yourself"

"All right, I will," answered the Maid 

As she took down a fan from the shelf

 

"Is that your plan?" the advisors laughed 

But the Maid would have her say

"I'll fan the air above the Queen's head 

To keep the mosquito away" 

 

"I like that plan," the Queen chimed in

"It sounds like it's the best

Let's try it out this very night 

And put it to the test"

 

So when the Queen was ready for bed 

The Maid brought in a fan

She waved it through the air all night 

Until the morning began

 

And when the Queen awakened 

From her first full night of sleep

She told the Maid she hadn't known 

That sleep could be that deep

 

"I haven't slept that well," said the Queen

"Since I was just a child"

And for the very first time in quite awhile 

Her Highness actually smiled​

PART II — SURPRISED

 

The next night with the fan around 

The mosquito stayed away

And the Queen awoke refreshed again 

Ready to start her day

 

The same thing happened every night 

For one week, then for two

The mosquito stayed away from the fan 

And the Queen slept the whole night through

 

But the Maid who was busy fanning the air 

Keeping the pest away

Still had chores throughout the castle 

That she had to do each day

 

So she never got to sleep herself 

In daytime or at night

Until one evening she nodded off 

Under the pale moonlight

 

Now the mosquito who was quite nearby 

Saw the Maid's head hit her chest

And the bug knew that this was the best chance yet 

To disturb the good Queen's rest

 

So it flew right over to the royal bed 

And landed on the Queen's cheek

While at the same moment somewhere in town 

A cat let out a SHRIEK!!!

 

The Maid awoke and saw the bug 

Getting ready to bite

She raised her hand and brought it down

Slapping with all her might

 

The Queen yelled out and sat straight up 

Holding the side of her face

"How dare you," she cried and the Maid replied 

"Forgive me please, Your Grace"

 

"Forgive you for slapping royalty?" 

The Queen said in full fury

"Why, I'll recommend your head be served 

On silver plate to the jury"

 

And the guard who was standing just outside 

Her Royal Highness's room

Entered the chamber with three of his men 

And took the Maid off to her doom

 

They dragged her down to the scary dungeon 

And attached an ankle chain

Then they closed and locked the heavy door 

Before the Maid could explain

 

The room was cold and dark and wet 

And the poor Maid started to cry

"I didn't mean to hurt the Queen

And I'm much too young to die"

 

"Won't somebody please believe me?" 

She shouted into the air

But no one came to rescue her 

And she sat down in despair

 

At last she cried herself to sleep 

On a damp little pile of straw

With her knees drawn up just under her chin 

And a hand underneath her jaw

PART III — OUTRAGED

 

The next day when the dawn broke forth

The castle staff stirred awake

And when word got out that the Queen had been slapped

They said, "For goodness sake"

 

Then the Queen came out still half asleep 

With a red mark on her cheek

And the servants all tried to hide their eyes 

But they couldn't help taking a peek 

 

The Queen walked on by like nothing was wrong 

And told the head of the guard

"Build a place to behead that horrible Maid 

Somewhere out in the yard!"

 

"And to make sure she suffers properly 

For slapping me on the cheek

I rule the beheading won't take place 

For another day and a week"

 

So the Maid spent her time saying good-bye 

To her friends and family

While the Queen was cursed by mosquitoes again 

Who attacked her endlessly

 

Though the Maid had killed one, hordes more of the pests

Had bred in the castle’s moat

For mosquitoes require little more than

Some water where their eggs can float

 

So every night a thousand bugs 

Gathered high above the Queen’s bed

And avoided the fan a new servant waved 

From the Queen's toes up to her head

 

The mosquitoes bit the mighty Queen 

On her face, her neck and each hand

The swarm was so big, some were always away from

Wherever the servant just fanned

 

The bugs bit the Queen until she arose 

Screaming in pain and fright

And returned every evening, ready for blood

Until the Queen was a terrible sight

 

Each morning a nurse placed a dab of mud 

Upon every one of the bites

While the Queen yelled at anyone anywhere near 

For not killing the pesky mites

 

Soon the dungeon was filled with the many who 

Had fanned the queen and failed

And cries were heard throughout the castle 

From the servants who were jailed

 

Now the Maid could hear these mournful moans 

From her tiny, airless room

And she knew that something must be done 

To get rid of the gloom

PART IV — OUTSMARTED

 

The night before her days were done 

The Maid’s friends came to pray

And while they were there, she thought up a plan 

To keep the mosquitoes away 

 

She sent her friends—the fisherfolk 

To fetch their nets and string

And when they returned she started to work 

And even began to sing

 

She worked all through the darkened night 

Until the break of dawn

And when the guards came to her cell 

She greeted them with a yawn

 

"I'd like to see the Queen," said the Maid 

"As my one and final request

I think I may just have a way

To foil those pesky pests"

 

The Maid was taken to the Queen's room 

Where she bowed down on one knee

"Before I'm sent off to my death

I'd like to make one last plea"

 

"Save your breath," the Queen replied  

"I don't care about your scheme

The last time I trusted one of your plans 

I woke up with a scream"

 

"But this one's different," the Maid exclaimed 

"I'm absolutely sure

Please just take a look at it 

Before sending me out the door"

 

The Queen let out a deep, long sigh 

Then took the thing she was handed

She unfolded it to take a look 

And the bundle quickly expanded

 

"What on earth," the Queen remarked 

So the Maid began to explain

"Just hang this above your bed tonight 

And your sleep will be free of pain"

 

The Maid went on to describe her idea

Since the Queen was full of doubt

"You see, instead of catching things 

This net keeps them out"

 

"I took a net that was used to trap fish 

And scrubbed off everything briny

Then wove in lots of string throughout 

Until all the holes were tiny"

 

"So when you make a curtain 

Of this net around your bed

The mosquitoes can't get in to bite 

While you're resting your weary head"

 

The Queen held the net up close to her eyes 

And gave it a thorough inspection

While her top advisors all gathered around 

Waiting for her rejection

 

But instead the Queen laughed and clapped her hands 

And took a little leap

"At last, an end to my misery 

I can finally get some sleep!"

 

With that the Maid and all of the servants 

Were saved from a terrible fate

In fact, the Maid was put in charge 

Of the Queen's entire estate

 

And the mosquitoes, well they tried and tried 

To fly right through the net

But at last they left for another land 

Where they hadn't been outsmarted yet

 

And so my friends, the lesson here 

Is simple but still true

If at first you don’t succeed 

Keep trying until you do

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THE END

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